Sunday, 16 December 2018

COP 3 - Women's Final Designs

  

Following some feedback on the women's designs, I adjusted a few things to refine them.

I reduced the size of the flick on the M and seperated the M from the C - this refine the design and made it easier to read.

I added 'free range' to the lasagne rather than the 'organic' on the macaroni - this showed differentiation in the products and stopped them looking too similar.




I added some pasta shapes to the lasagne that I felt best resembled the product itself - this was to help tie in to the the pasta tube illustrations featured on the macaroni cheese packaging.

I described the lasagne as 'made with low fat beef and three layers of free-range egg pasta' as opposed to the simplicity of the men's 'made with 3 layers of pasta, beef bolognese and cheddar'.





I added an organic and free range badge to the front of the women's packaging - these were not present on the men's as research suggests they care less for this sort of information - even though they still applied for the product inside.




The cooking instructions were the exact same for both genders, however the typeface Geosans for the women's was a lot lighter and gentler than the capitalized men's version.

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